http://www.thewritingcentre.co.uk/ http://www.thewritingcentre.co.uk/images/stories/ucf-logo.gif http://www.thewritingcentre.co.uk/ http://www.thewritingcentre.co.uk/find-a-writer/577-focus There are some Ok ideas here, but so many typos - not very professional. ]]> Christophe Philipps Find a Writer 2008-10-30 11:25:07 http://www.thewritingcentre.co.uk/find-a-writer/577-focus Not bad for a first effort, but still needs a lot of work. There is the kernel of a good idea here - I like the concept of the Faustian pact - but the characters are not differentiated enough, and the writer needs to do more research to convince us he understands the workings of a political party, even a small one. ]]> Miles Taylor Find a Writer 2008-10-15 11:23:23