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You've clearly done a lot of research into the setting for this. I can get a really good mental picture of the locations in the Scilly Isles and I like the way you've used this idyllic setting to juxtapose the mental anguish that the protagonist is going through.

The narrative moves along at a cracking pace and there is a great sense of suspense at key moments.

As already mentioned though there are a few moments where the grammar lets the imagery down - but nothing that a good edit wouldn't be able to fix fairly quickly.

All in all, a cracking read.
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3.9
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4.0
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3.0
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4.0
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3.0
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4.0
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4.0
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4.0
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5.0
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April 16, 2009

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